Alright... For Those Other Reviewers...
I don't Understand what your dilema... If you watch closely... There a Wisps of "WhatEver" Its like Mario... If They touch you -- You DIE!...
Stop Complaining about why you kept dying... Plus... It's a quick submit --
Anyways for the author --
The game was actually fun... with a few annoyances... Jumping was a bit too high as well as the annoying enemies are hard to notice... and hard to dodge to get uh... what ever you had to pick up --
The idea of bouncing ground was amusing -- I coulda done that all day... Also the "game" itself was presented decently...
Hm... Since we're on presentation -- You could absolutely start a menu system -- and more... Not just a flat out "Press Start" -- Its cool and all -- But kudo's for making it more fancy...
I assume this isn't finished -- because if it was I would be dissapointed -- this was a great game to begin with... Just polishing a bit and an awesome "slug" mario-esque game woulda been made...