I'd Wish I'd Get Feed Back --
This is one of the best trailers I've seen. The style and the art is well done to near perfection -- One thing to comment is that... All the art and the detail is so precise at moments -- The Shadow Scene had mainly black and little detail -- I mean its only like 3 seconds so I really shouldn't complain -- but you've put so much effort everywhere else -- It would've been nice if you added a tiny bit more detail in that scene -- Also the "Running through Forest" scene and the "Skateboard" scene were not outlined the rest of the movie -- (I might be missing more scenes) it woulda been a little nicer to have had them consistant --
Don't get me wrong -- I love the movie -- Cough* Trailer Cough* -- And I've added it to my favorites... It was an amazing peice of work... I'd love to see the rest --
Next thing I noticed is... the Music -- I just watched both of the movies on NG ... And I have to say one thing... Please change the music -- It bugged me to hear a Final Fantasy theme in this -- Especially since it was a battle theme -- not an "intro" theme... And It was basically a loop during the whole movie --
But One thing to note... The timing of the sound and the move was pretty damn good! -- One I noticed that was well done was the timing with the climatic rising of the battle theme while -- He was changing because of the sword... Hm... But Again with good timing was with bad interpretation -- This is only my opinion and this is your project so my words shouldn't mean shit -- But... One thing that bugged me -- was the unexpected FF battle theme when the movie JUST started... Also the music just flatly didn't fit in other parts...
Lastly about sound -- The sound effects were out balanced by the music -- or vice versa --
I'm sorry if I've been very... very critical --
It's the reason that -- God... This is amazing art work -- And That's all I coulda said -- Just... Damn... The Music bugged me... (only a 5)
Anyways Keep up the Good Work and...
I like Lar better than Khale =P
It was really short -- even for a teaser... But I'm not complaining
The Animating on that was beautiful -- Some of the finest "Pencil" tool drawing (I think you used pencil; Correct me if I'm wrong) -- But still the Style of art and animating was just amazing...
The sound was nearly to nothing, Just ambience... I've got a few questions -- so that means its a good teaser... Well...
I can't Wait
I remember these guys from TNMT... for my Snes... don't get me wrong... I'm 14... but... Haha... very nicely done with the humor in this peice!
It fun... with it's silliness and randomness... I love it
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I've watched this on multiple occasions, and yet it never seems old. It's very well done. And That's all i have to say. Its simply breath taking how you created such a masterpeice! LoL
You're not too bad at sprite animations, It's good, but the sprite proportion changes between each scene, of course it takes a bit to get everyone looking the same size, but it would help. But its Very good. And maybe some voice actors Just a suggestion
thx for your review. Yeah I know I had some little problem with my sprites
It's Good Over All, I like Sprite Animations
It's Damn Good, But, You could tweak things (Like I should Talk, My Animations Suck Ass) But, like one guy said, you need to make sprites bigger (if Possible) Next, You could add voice overs, i was barely able to read the text at the beginning! But, Again i can't judge, i'm not even close as good as you... Good Job, I'll be Looking foward for the rest of it!
I luv you guys!
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